When I say… |
When I say, ‘Be here, be with me’, Don’t think that I want to bind you; Being with you is what I cherish, The moments are forever, though few. --- When I say, ‘Be truthful and honest’, I also mean, ‘Be gentle and not rude’; I want you to be happy and fair, Better be stupid but not shrewd! --- When I say, ‘I miss you so much’, I mean to say, ‘I care, I really do’; Nothing much that I really want, It’s enough if you just say, ‘me too’! --- When I say, ‘there’s a problem’, Don’t shy away, just be there; I’ll resolve, you need not, Just be patient and give your ear. --- When I say, ‘Don’t leave me ever’, Won’t stop you but love will remain; I know you’ll go where destiny takes, If you’re mine - will come back again! |
Tuesday, August 4, 2009
When I say…
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Inspiration,
Life,
Love,
Philosophy,
Poetry
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15 comments:
very sweet..... lovely one...fr sure u wrote ths.. for the person u love.. :)
really a good one....keep going..
hmm... really a good one. I really liked the poem. Post some more romantic poems of yours....
Carry on....
@taru - i love ur comment! hmmm...not necessarily for the person i love but for the person who loves me... :-P
@manisha - thank you so much!
@amrita - thanks dear - i vil... :)
I din't know u write non academic stuff n i ws pleasantly surprised....well true insights into d plain words!!! Liked it a lot. Says a lot of things that words dont say....
It ws Mohita btw
@Words of Silence - thank u so much dear!
"Sometimes silence is more eloquent than words and less says more."
~@ngshu
@misha - hopefully it will...thanks dear! :)
nice understandings recreated.
It is so beautiful. It really touched my heart....Keep writing. God bless you.
So sweet. this poem is fabulous. Thanks for sharing.
@Pratishtha and @Rudy - thanks a lot. Hav a gr9 time. :)
-@ngshu
my first time here...read a couple of your posts and really liked the style...simple, impactful and non fussy...this one particularly...would love to say this to someone in my life...couldn't have said it better :)
Cheers!
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