Tuesday, August 4, 2009

When I say…

When I say…

When I say, ‘Be here, be with me’,

Don’t think that I want to bind you;

Being with you is what I cherish,

The moments are forever, though few.

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When I say, ‘Be truthful and honest’,

I also mean, ‘Be gentle and not rude’;

I want you to be happy and fair,

Better be stupid but not shrewd!

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When I say, ‘I miss you so much’,

I mean to say, ‘I care, I really do’;

Nothing much that I really want,

It’s enough if you just say, ‘me too’!

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When I say, ‘there’s a problem’,

Don’t shy away, just be there;

I’ll resolve, you need not,

Just be patient and give your ear.

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When I say, ‘Don’t leave me ever’,

Won’t stop you but love will remain;

I know you’ll go where destiny takes,

If you’re mine - will come back again!

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16 comments:

taru said...

very sweet..... lovely one...fr sure u wrote ths.. for the person u love.. :)

Manisha said...

really a good one....keep going..

HijiBijiBij said...

hmm... really a good one. I really liked the poem. Post some more romantic poems of yours....
Carry on....

Angshu said...

@taru - i love ur comment! hmmm...not necessarily for the person i love but for the person who loves me... :-P

Angshu said...

@manisha - thank you so much!

Angshu said...

@amrita - thanks dear - i vil... :)

Words of Silence said...

I din't know u write non academic stuff n i ws pleasantly surprised....well true insights into d plain words!!! Liked it a lot. Says a lot of things that words dont say....

Words of Silence said...

It ws Mohita btw

Angshu said...

@Words of Silence - thank u so much dear!
"Sometimes silence is more eloquent than words and less says more."
~@ngshu

misha said...

nice...you've captured many emotions at one go...
hopefully...it'll go on!!
keep writing!

Angshu said...

@misha - hopefully it will...thanks dear! :)

Unknown said...

nice understandings recreated.

Pratishtha said...

It is so beautiful. It really touched my heart....Keep writing. God bless you.

Rudy said...

So sweet. this poem is fabulous. Thanks for sharing.

Angshu said...

@Pratishtha and @Rudy - thanks a lot. Hav a gr9 time. :)
-@ngshu

The Speaking Wood said...

my first time here...read a couple of your posts and really liked the style...simple, impactful and non fussy...this one particularly...would love to say this to someone in my life...couldn't have said it better :)

Cheers!

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